Soil

Talking about when accused to go to hell.

 BEYOND THAT DOOR

His eyes laid upon

a scene so vulnerable 

to the look in his eyes

a smile of confidence began to form across his face 

Pushing the door open, the vulnerable ran,

ran from his look,

into the darkness of his soul 

just at the center

being swallowed into the pit of beyond the soil of home.

Author's Note

I have noticed a lot of what i write is very story-like.

Reviews

[Abilash Uttama]

good work. if you don't mind i'll suggest using repetition in open verse, it will add charm to your work :)