Take me the way I am

Take me the way I am

A Poem by The Random Writings Of Me..Kates
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Older piece of writing but felt the need to post something postive

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Can you feel the shiver that shakes my body?

Your touch, so gentle

My hearts a flutter

 

You hold my hand, when I am weeping.

Pour me a glass of wine, and then you help me drink it.

You light my cigarette, and watch me smoke it.

 

I love the way I am

You love me the way I am

 

When you are cold, I’ll make you warm,

If you are sick, I’ll make you better.

I’ll kiss your crying tears, I’ll wipe them away.

 

Love me the way I am.

 

I love you the way you are.

 

Hold on tight, the ride is getting stronger

Call me baby, your voice is music.

 

I hear you calling, just wait a minute.

Because my mind is smiling at the thought of you calling.

 

You take me the way I am.

 

I love the way you see me, when I am feeling down.

 

You kiss my lips and run your hands through my hair,

You comfort me, you take me the way I am.

 

No longer scared, no longer sad.

No longer cold, cause you’re holding my hand.

 

I love the way you say my name,

I love the way you hold me,

When I wake up next to you, I love the way you kiss me.

 

You promise me nothing and give me the world.

 

You take me the way I am.

© 2008 The Random Writings Of Me..Kates


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It's great to see one of my old favorite back up again. The words ring with as much truth as before too. It's hard enough gaining self-acceptance, but then to have people refuse to accept us for who we are...no way...hit the road...take me as I am or leave. There is so much strength in this...just to be able to feel this shows that you've learned to love and accept yourself. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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A song from the heart..
It will take a man to really know who we are. And knowing a person inside out will not happen overnight. So this piece is very seasonable. Seasonable in the sense that it has been set on the appropriate time which is in the middle of a relationship. It is not right to say "accept me for what I am" when two people are in the start of a relationship but rather at a later time. A very simple write yet very precise:) well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Random Writings Of Me..Kates

11 Years Ago

Thank you, this is a very old piece... written about a love - well one I thought I loved, but unfort.. read more
It's great to see one of my old favorite back up again. The words ring with as much truth as before too. It's hard enough gaining self-acceptance, but then to have people refuse to accept us for who we are...no way...hit the road...take me as I am or leave. There is so much strength in this...just to be able to feel this shows that you've learned to love and accept yourself. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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