All Is Gone

You gave me all
I embrace that
Now you are gone
I am longing
But then I realized
The emptiness was not
lonely
It pushed me somewhere
Somewhere I did not explore
When you were there
Because my world was you
And you alone
Now, that too changed
I evolved, I became
Someone else I wasn't
Thank you for that gift
Of opening my eyes
An awesome release!

Reviews

[katevincent]

Thank you very much. I appreciate your review

[Saddam]

The emptiness was not lonely
It pushed me somewhere
Somewhere I did not explore
When you were there
Because my world was you.

Beautiful write dear which every words touched heart. Great write. Keep it up.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

This is a lovely piece of writing. Such insight. You must write more.