You wish

About a boy and the wishes he has after he hurt a girl he lied to.

  You wish,  

  You could go back in time,  

  And change every bad thing you did,  

  Including what you did to me.  

 

  You wish,  

  You didn't lie to me.  

  You wish,  

  You didn't make me cry.  

 

  But you lied to me.  

  You made me cry.  

 

  We sat together,  

  We talked together,  

  And you told me,  

  Everything we did together,  

  Was just a game,  

  A game between your friends.  

 

  I can't believe yet,  

  That everything you said to me,  

  Were lies.  

  I was just a toy in you and your friend's game.  

 

  Then you said,  

  You really do love me,  

  And that it was the truth.  

 

   But really,  

  I don't know anymore.  

  Are you telling me the truth,  

  That you really love me?  

 

  Or is everything a game,  

  A game filled with lies?  

 

  This love between us,  

  Is just falling apart.  

  But is it even real love?  

  I really have no clue.  

 

   Do you think I can believe,  

  Whatever you say to me now,  

  After all those lies?  

 

  You wish,  

  You could change everything,  

  Everything in the past.  

  So we could be happy together.  

 

  But I don't know

  If I can trust you anymore.  

  You wish,  

  I could trust you,  

  That everything was going to be okay...  

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Reviews

[Thea]

Hi, Kathrina... :)))
This is actually a really good poem...It is filled with such strong emotions...
When someone we know so much betrayed us by telling lies, it is really hard to fix the broken pieces again which is trust...
I like this piece...You've written it so well...Though at some parts, I get confused, I think, you still did fine here...
I don't understand why "someone" rated you a low rating here... >,<
You did so much effort on this so...
Here's a 100 for yah...
Keep writing... :)))

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Nicely done, something everyone can relate to. i'm sure.

[Kaine]

I'm not convinced. Every time you write "you wish", I feel that what you're really saying is "I wish". But it definitely adds to the confusion and the uncertainty that this poem is trying to convey (and have succeded in).