Fade away

Let's,

Fade away,

Into the bright blue skies,

Filled with white fluffy clouds.

 

No one,

Will bother us there.

No one,

Will judge us anymore.

 

Fade away,

Into my heart,

Where it's waiting for you.

 

Fade away,

Into the darkness,

And I'll join you,

Even if I don't,

Want to be there.

 

I'll help you.

Protect you.

 

You did,

So much for me.

So,

I'll do the same for you,

Until we are even.

 

Fade away,

From me,

And I might lose life in my eyes.

 

You made,

Life spark in my eyes.

You gave me light,

In my dark life.

 

You made me see,

Things I never saw before.

 

And I'm glad,

You were the one,

That did this to me.

 

If you,

Fade away,

Into a colorless world.

 

I'll change it.

I'll be the color,

You always wanted to see...

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[paparapapa]

Oh my. This is really beautiful! First, the format you chose and the different colors added to the beauty of this poem. Second, the flow was magnificent. It captivated me from start till the end. Third, this is soooo sweet. It's making me giddy. Haha. And  fourth, I love how you ended it. I can't say more but AMAZING! This is definitely going to my library! Loved it. :)

This is an amazing poem, well done :D

[PokemonFan#1]

It was awsome! It was like it was talking about a rainbow!

I liked it!

KEEP IT UP!

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I like it. The "even if I don't want to be there" throws me off a bit. Otherwise the entire poem is quite positive and imaginative.

[CrimsonBlaze]

I was wondering if you loved rainbow colors or something but when it said , " I'll be the color you always wanted to see," I was like, woah! Great play on the words and colors XD! -grabs poem off shelf and stuffs it in library- -stares back in your face eyes wide- "You never saw anything," I said, posting the poem on my wall/library.
In other words, supercalifrigilasticespealidocius job !

[tk]

wow.. i am so captivated and mesmerized with this! you even made this more wonderful with the use of different font colors and the image of a rainbow. :) this is a truly beautiful poem...! :))

[Alewis]

everything was GREAT from the picture, the font, and the words. I suddenly felt calm and i loved how it flowed all together. Great job :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully written cheerful piece. Nicely done.

[Thea]

Aw...That was so sweet and wonderful...
I was having a really soothing feeling while reading this and I don't know why...
The changes in every line in this poem is just perfect...
It was flawless...
Just simply amazing...
Thanks for sharing this! I enjoyed reading it!!!
:)))
Keep up the good work, Kathrina!
^_^

[Hachamecha]

I feel the strength in the poem :)
nice write

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how captivating you give the colors to the your friend's soul :) great poem it made me smile knowing there's still color to a black and white world. :D