Symphony

Symphony

A Poem by Kaotic Barbie
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I can no longer hear you speak.

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  You cuss me out in your broken dreams
Licking me, the dried up honey
Digging your claws into my dreadfullness
Singing me your torturous symphony.

Sending me into crashing spasms
Your hatred will not be released
Drowning my ever falling fear
Untill it has totally ceased.

The music can nolonger crowd my ears
For I am a deaf human now
Why did you take away a sense i kept
For my sins are not worth your vow.

So heres to the end of your voice
Your tormenting visions of epiphony
For your words can not make me fall
I can nolonger hear your hatefull symphony.

So discard the words you wanted to say
I'm not listening anymore
For you took that  priviledge away from me
So much for your careless encore.

I used to be your butterfly
Your beautiful, mysterious object
Now I'm just a quite sinister to you
Burried in your lifeless neglect.

Coward, you are for tempting me
For taking my rights and thinking its funny
I would rather have my ears bleed
Then to be burdened by your symphony.

© 2008 Kaotic Barbie


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Nice.♥♥♥:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


You cuss me out in your broken dreams
Licking me, the dried up honey
Digging your claws into my dreadfullness
Singing me your torturous symphony.

I just love your opening stanza, this is wonderful, you do have talent I hope you keep writing.

I used to be your butterfly
Your beautiful, mysterious object
Now I'm just a quite sinister to you
Burried in your lifeless neglect.

This stanza grabbed me as well, "I used to be your butterfly" I loved that. I write songs sometimes and I think this would make an awesome song. I think your peom should've been called "I Used To Be Your Butterfly" No kidding I don't know if you know Cheryl Crow or not but This almost sounds like something
she would do Awesome Write!!!...................Kim

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Kaotic Barbie
Kaotic Barbie

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Kati. I'm 20 years old and live in Baltimore, Maryland "And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. Th.. more..

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