Love Don't Live Here No More

Hes leaving me.

 Love took a train down south tonight
And it aint going to call once it gets there
I feel empy in this house all alone
Because I can't find love anywhere.

I know I'm not good enough for you
I've been telling you since way before
But now is when you finally realize it;
Love don't live here no more.

You knew everything about this soul
This soul of sadness and insecurity
But still you chose to fight to be with me
Believing to change my intense ferity.

I confided in your supporting love
To the point where my heart is so sore
How could you leave me like this;
Love dont live here no more.

You dealt with me for so long
And all of a sudden decided to quit
Don't you see what your doing to me
Arresting my heart as a lifelong convict.

Your imprisoning the harmless
The one sinking on her own shore
You leave me here dieing alone
Because love dont live here no more.

Author's Note

I am writing this at a very depressing time for me. Ignore grammar problems or spelling problems please.

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

very emotional & heart breaking piece. "You knew everything about this soul
This soul of sadness and insecurity
But still you chose to fight to be with me
Believing to change my intense ferity." this is my favorite stanza because i can't even tell you how much i can relate. but the entire poem is amazing. very heart-felt & sad. the flow is smooth from line to line & word to word they all just blend together. very good write & going in my favorites.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

very well written...a sad and insightful poem...I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

[darkgurl]

You dealt with me for so long
And all of a sudden decided to quit
Don't you see what your doing to me
Arresting my heart as a lifelong convict.

Your imprisoning the harmless
The one sinking on her own shore
You leave me here dieing alone
Because love dont live here no more.


Again I could almost feel this as a song, you must write songs as well as wonderful poetry, this i well written penned with sadness but beautifully written.....Kim