Could You Stand Where I Stood?

Could You Stand Where I Stood?

A Poem by Kaotic Barbie
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Just some memories of my unremarkable childhood.

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Never understanding the meaning of love
Growing up to a misled childhood
Learning off of strictly trial and error
Could you stand where I stood?

Always the child in the time out corner
For not learning the right way to play.
Not knowing If Dad will come back from rehab
Or If I will have to wait another day.

I was different from all the others
With both their parents at the conferences
I was alone and quiet to them
So they threw up their walls, their fences.

Going back to a broken home
A home that left me missunderstood
From all the indescribable scenes
Could you stand where I stood?

Drunken wars with my parents
Leaving me crying on my little knees
Screaming to stop hurting her daddy
That isn't even the beginning of my journeys.

Night time would come and nightmares surface
From the endless grimly nights in my girlhood
They still don't know how much it hurt me
Could you stand where I stood?

© 2008 Kaotic Barbie


Author's Note

Kaotic Barbie
No child should have to deal with these things.

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Yes. No child should ever have to deal with these things. The fact that you have the strength and courage to share your memories with us shows me just how strong you really are. Having to stand where you stood, where no child should ever need to stand... Thank you for inking your piece as it brings awareness to others. The memories may be from an unremarkable childhood, but you are a remarkable young lady for opening up and sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I did stand there and share with you these emotions. Thank you for penning them so beautifully. Nice job.

-Chad-

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes. No child should ever have to deal with these things. The fact that you have the strength and courage to share your memories with us shows me just how strong you really are. Having to stand where you stood, where no child should ever need to stand... Thank you for inking your piece as it brings awareness to others. The memories may be from an unremarkable childhood, but you are a remarkable young lady for opening up and sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kaotic Barbie
Kaotic Barbie

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Kati. I'm 20 years old and live in Baltimore, Maryland "And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. Th.. more..

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