Open Your Eyes

before its too late.

Have we gone too far
Breaking out the truth, the fear, the lies
Choking on our blindess
Open your eyes.

It is all just a very bad dream
Crowding our beautiful minds
Trying to take over our worlds
And slowly closing down our blinds.

We all want to scream for help
To get us away from this guilt
But with no hands to grab onto
We must be broken down to be rebuilt.

And if it could only be that simple
returning to hope with beautiful blue skys
Were only getting closer to death.
Open your eyes.

We started dieing when we first arrived
And practising the seven deadly sins
Nobody gets out of here alive
Its just when everyones soul begins.

And in the end when our soul has left
Left this fleshy skin for which we are trapped
A mystery lies far ahead
Just another pretty gift to be unwrapped.

So befor it's too late
Let your soul live it's dream and rise
For we don't have much time left.
Open your eyes.

Reviews

[The DuchessPoet]

This is incredible and a very captivating write!
A wonderfully written piece!

I really enjoyed reading your talent!

Bravo, my talented friend, Bravo!

The Duchess,.

[bluessadmood]

this is a deep journey into your soul..looking inside every feeling ..every hope
its a sad true look on life..the deciet ,the pain ,the anger..all
It is all just a very bad dream
Crowding our beautiful minds
Trying to take over our worlds
And slowly closing down our blinds..it is a bad dream..life is a bad dream..a nightmare..we would love to wake
taking over our worlds..closing our eyes
We all want to scream for help
To get us away from this guilt
But with no hands to grab onto
We must be broken down to be rebuilt..life is built on guilt ..the day you were born
you want to get away from it ..but you are bound to it so strong
And if it could only be that simple
returning to hope with beautiful blue skys
Were only getting closer to death.
Open your eyes..so wise words ..always want to get away from it ..the guilt the pain
but if you do manage to get your escape and see your beautiful skies..then you
are closer to death more than you think
We started dieing when we first arrived
And practising the seven deadly sins
Nobody gets out of here alive
Its just when everyone soul begins we started dying the day we arrived ..how very true ..how wise
nobody gets out alive..and when we die ..and the soul leaves our flesh..a great mystery then start
so before its too late ..let your soul lives the dream and rise..for there is not much time..so very wise what you say. ...
lovely ..so wise yet sad write