Shooting Star

I'm feeling a positive poem.

A dark sight breaking away.
A drip of taste and a drop of love.
My lips so red and the color so right.
Tonight I can finally feel the symphony above.

Ringing in my ears but in a beautiful way.
Tonight's the night of magical meaning.
The spirit surrounding the smile I give.
The dark spirit vanished, no more grieving.

I was so blind then, I know it all now.
With my eyes wide open, I can see so far.
I'm swimming in music and losing my fears.
Flying so high, just call me a shooting star.

The crystals in my eyes tell all.
With the storm gone, my beauty is free.
It's my cup of tea now and I don't mind.
Come one, come all, I am such a sight see.

You can have all this if you just try.
Just take a chance and forgive your soul.
It will not be a regret, you will shine on.
Don't let the others judge you, play your own role.

The sky's always looking for just one more.
So take a chance and crack the door ajar.
Stick your head out and watch us all shine.
Now it's your turn to be your own shooting star.

Author's Note

Take note, this is the first positive poem I have done in months. I am so happy I can feel so...happy. Reviews would be a blessing. Thanks.

Reviews

[Octob3r Star]

Great write!

[Pax Analog]

Beautiful, dear.

I have noticed your struggles w/darker moods, and empathized utterly.

This fine poem carries all the energy and grace of alignment to shining Spirit. It touches the reader exactly as you intend -- a blessing indeed.

[Shelby Taylor]

I lov it very nice

[Dream Weaver]

Truly a positive write Kati... It's nice to step out into light
every now and again..I enjoyed this very much, nicely done.

[Shawn Killian]

I'm glad that you have the ability to go from writing your darker material, to something like this. It shows true talent and that is all that matters