One, two, because of you

One for the cut

One for the burn

One for this everlasting f*****g cure

Two for the shots

Two for the stares

Two for the evil f*****g glares

Three for the wounds

Three for me family

Three for my stupid molesting daddy

Four for the scars

Four for the words

Four for the stupid f*****g horrors

Five for the asylum

Five for his touch

Five this is all way too much

Six for my body

Six for the lies

Six for the screaming silent cries

Seven for love

Eight for failure

Nine I'm a f*****g killer

Ten for why

Eleven for them

Twelve is all because of him

Reviews

[SarahV]

This poem is amazing. I really love the parralel structure of "One for..." etc etc. Very dark distrubing poem but I love it's emotions, keep writting :)

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~ keep writing powerful poetry... till you express your pain...

[Miseryb]

I don't know enough about stanza or free verse ( those are words right? ) to give a review worth anything. I read it and had to give my personal opinion on it though. Wow! I really loved this!