The Only Answer's Death

When something's really broken it's tough to get it healed
 when lies have been uncovered small truths too are revealed
 when silence marks an ending and darkness drowns the light
 when all hope seems to fail you and you can't stand to fight
 when God can't spare an angel and cloudy skies still cry
 when life's a heavy burden with no reason to try
 when all friends do abandon and nothing can remain
 when tears and blood are mixing and cause one aching stain
 when cuts and bruises mar your skin with every single breath
 there's nothing more for you to do the only answer's death

Author's Note

reviews and comments please

Reviews

[StarlaFireDelta]

wow, you are a writer in disquise ..write some songs my dear
The connections will come if you have the material ..
and talk about it to everyone, this is your calling

[kayamon215]

do you really believe that? :)

[jennilouhoo]

Very well written. It's very sad and depressing, but there's something horrifically beautiful about it. Great job!

[kayamon215]

thank you :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh wow, this is really depressing but good as Amber reviewed below. Life can be depressing and we seem to think that death is the only answer to resolve. Actually to me, that's the coward way to go about business. Stand up and prove that you're strong enough to walk through the obstacles in life fiercely! Though, it might be difficult but God didn't tend for anything to be easy in life. If you set your mind on making something more harsh and depressing, then that's how it's going to be. Find the positive sides on everything even though that might be very hard to do so. Never say never! No, I'm not referring to Justin Bieber's song either XD Haha! Just know that with God's faith and trust in him everything'll turn out perfectly fine. I know things don't turn out great but he wants and urges you to call out for him when going through depressing and harsh conditions in life. A great poem once again! :)

"there's nothing more for you to do the only answer's death"--- Correction, you better pray instead of ending your life. You never know he might change your life around in one day or might take a week to do so. Patience is the key factor. :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[kayamon215]

thank you for the comment :) and yeah you're right it's just sometimes it's kind of hard to think that way

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Haha you're very welcome :) and yeah I know exactly what you mean by that too!

[Amber]

Wow this is depressing, but good nonetheless!

[kayamon215]

thank you :) and not really depressing its just life and sometimes life isn't always smiles :/

[Amber]

Yeah I know exactly what you mean. I really love this though. :)

[kayamon215]

thank you for commenting :)

[Amber]

No problem. :)