I Love You

I tried to write an actual poem, but it turned into a song like everything else I do. Ohwell.

I'm haunted by your presence
Yet you're not even here
I feel your arms around me
Even though you're far from near me
I hear your voice whisper
In my ear late at night
You say you'll always love me
You tell me goodnight

Baby, don't you think we're kinda
Crazy to love the way we do
Baby, I love you
And hey, yeah, we belong together and
Maybe it'll be a while but
Baby, you're worth it to me
You know it's love when you'd do anything for someone
I know that I love you

I look forward to every picture
I love every text message
I like the way you call me without warning
And tell me that you love me
I like your smile, I like your eyes
The way you joke around with me all the time
How when I'm upset you comfort me

Baby, don't you think we're k inda
Crazy to love the way we do
Baby, I love you
And hey, yeah, we belong together and
Maybe it'll be a while but
Baby, you're worth it to me
You know it's love when you'd do anything for someone
I know that I love you

I hope you know that I love
Absolutely everything about you
You're amazing inside and out
I hope you know that I love you

But baby, we are kinda
Crazy, for falling in love
Baby, I love you
I belong with you and you belong with me and
Someday we'll be together
Baby, you're worth the wait
You know I'd do anything for you
I love you

Reviews

[Moflo]

I can definitely see the musical quality behind this, very heartfelt indeed and nice portrayal of emotions. I like it!

[Blake]

I found myself almost singing it inside my head...didn't turn out so well. But without singing it myself, this is a very beautiful poem/song with a very clear meaning with a great emotion to it. I loved it. Great job

[tekphobik]

It's a pop song. No...? ...

Oh.

[Seshat Nidaba]

A part of me has to smile when I see all these text messages in love poems nowadays, pink no less.

But you are quite musical in your word choice, these would make beautiful lyrics. It's really not that hard to learn the guitar you know.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of love. The poem got stronger and better with each line. When we share and receive love. Need to be with a honest heart and emotion like in this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[PoetInBlack]

This poem made me smile the whole way through.
Your an amazing writer, please don't stop. (:

[Antonio Valentino]

harder to find a more loving example of affection...

this was so innocently sweet and pure... just how life was meant to be..

sounds like a beautiful song, the words provided the perfect harmony...

:)

[halflives]

This is a great poem! Usually I'm not a poetry person, but this was excellent. I love the way it flows, as Shnerd said, and the idea is very beautiful. Loved it!

[Short.Nerd]

I love this poem! It has a nice flow and seems very happyish to me :) Excellent job! I love the color you used for it too by the way :) Keep up the good work.

[Light and ashes]

Just wonderful :] So enjoyable to read. I have no idea what the music would sound like but the lyrics are really fantastic. This is so beautiful. I love it.