I Love You

I tried to write an actual poem, but it turned into a song like everything else I do. Ohwell.

I'm haunted by your presence
Yet you're not even here
I feel your arms around me
Even though you're far from near me
I hear your voice whisper
In my ear late at night
You say you'll always love me
You tell me goodnight

Baby, don't you think we're kinda
Crazy to love the way we do
Baby, I love you
And hey, yeah, we belong together and
Maybe it'll be a while but
Baby, you're worth it to me
You know it's love when you'd do anything for someone
I know that I love you

I look forward to every picture
I love every text message
I like the way you call me without warning
And tell me that you love me
I like your smile, I like your eyes
The way you joke around with me all the time
How when I'm upset you comfort me

Baby, don't you think we're k inda
Crazy to love the way we do
Baby, I love you
And hey, yeah, we belong together and
Maybe it'll be a while but
Baby, you're worth it to me
You know it's love when you'd do anything for someone
I know that I love you

I hope you know that I love
Absolutely everything about you
You're amazing inside and out
I hope you know that I love you

But baby, we are kinda
Crazy, for falling in love
Baby, I love you
I belong with you and you belong with me and
Someday we'll be together
Baby, you're worth the wait
You know I'd do anything for you
I love you

Reviews

[Harp]

Amazing.

[chrisdavid]

This comes across as a love that you haven't met yet? Maybe via the internet? I can feel how much he means to you, and when you do meet, I'm confident it will be everything you've ever wanted. This almost could be lyrics to a song. Was that your plan on this? Nice work!!!
Take care, Chris.

[alexlessah]

you can defiantly feel the love, i loved how you portray this feeling. i like it

[Lily Mae]

Excellent write. You've penned the feelings of love and hope so well. You put a smile on my face allowing me to remember my first love and how those treasured moments felt. :) x

[~Lizzy♬]

It's so cool!!! :)

~Lizzard~