Backyard Dozing

I lay in the grass,

The soft green sea engulfing me

And I drowsed off fast.

 

The doubts of the day

Were buried away and my

Burdens slowly passed.

 

Then when I awoke,

I rubbed my eyes and spoke of

Being lost at sea.

 

For, my love, that’s how

I felt when you weren’t with me.

 

Memories from my slumber,

My words began to redeem.

 

For in my sleep,

The things that I had wondered

Were breaking at the seams.

 

And that morning,

I broke the spell that I had been under.

and I discovered my heart’s dream.

Reviews

[Bell-lala]

This is so lovely! :) I agree, it dose have a nice flow. You've produced a beautiful poem ^-^ keep up the awesome work :)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

This is beautiful. The words flow, the rhymes are great, excellently written :) Nicley done!