The feelings we go through

I wrote this a couple of months ago. I was depressed when I wrote this one and a little tired too, but it's one of the best poems I ever wrote.

I don't know any more.

There's days where I'm lonely, where I'm sad, where death is upon me and then there's mad.

I don't know any more.

There's times I feel awful and weird.
Sometimes I feel like the hunted deer.
some days I look at the world.
Then there's days life is hard to hold.
There's days I look and smile at the sky
Then there's days I wonder if it's all a lie.

When I speak though it's all clear.
When we die our life and spirit never disappears.

Author's Note

one of my first ever poems so please tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Akash]

Its very good.
For a begining poem its one of the best.
You take out the best out of yourself when you are in a pinch.
It truly oozes depression and melancholy.

Sad
-akash-

[Kgosi]

nice piece... you left me to wonder.... i'm wondering