Falling Down

One of two poems...the girls's side *Credit to my friends for starting this*

I never thought I'd see the day,
The moment when you've gone away.
Because in my head I thought it was forever,
But I guess it was just...whatever.

When I saw you,

Chills went down my spine.
And when I first met you,

I thought you'd be forever mine.

Sometimes now,

I think of us.

How it would've worked out,

If we had trust.

 

Now I feel so lost and dark,

Because you've left such a deep mark.

It was just so perfect for me,

Now I hope you can finally see.

 

Author's Note

Check out the guys side too...called Over You

Pictures from http://melapoodle.tumblr.com/ My friend is a very talented photographer...check her out

Reviews

[J.M]

sad but kinda sweet - a very evocative poem

[mrbigteddybear]

I have felt your pain way too many times but this pain is what makes us stronger