she came along.

she came along.

A Poem by Vanessa
"

my best guy friend just got a new girlfriend and he doesn't talk to me anymore. :( so this is just my thoughts on what's going on right now.

"

not sure what to say.

not sure what to do.

but at the end of the day,

you always come through.

 

been by my side since we met,

promised to stay friends.

but when she came along,

everything ends.

 

she takes up your time,

keeps you away from me.

I try to get closer,

but I still cant see.

 

but I do see one thing,

she's more important.

now the time spent with me,

is definitely shortened.

 

so have fun with her,

I hope it goes right.

but keep in mind who thinks of you,

and the end of the night.

© 2014 Vanessa


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I can definitely relate, this is beautifully done. Thank you for writing it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vanessa

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! No problem. :)
I too have felt this way. Some people are just unable to handle the balance of relationships and friends. This poem is very well thought out and to the point. Thank you for writing it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vanessa

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)

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