A Lovely Star

Loving her is the best job God as given me 

Her beauty is as soft as the sand 

Her eyes are as beautiful as the ocean 

A relationship that grew faster then the stars lite up the night sky

That is why shes not just a loving person that i know 

She is my loving star 

In my eyes she brightens up my night and days

Time spent away from her is like living a lonely year 

But she smiles and I get chills 

No amount of time apart 

Shall change 

The love i have I have for the woman 

I call my friend 

My family 

My world 

My reason 

My reason 

Shes a star 

I found 

In time of darkness 

She lights up my heart 

That is why I call her 

My loving star 

Reviews

[TPK Stories]

Loved the rhythm of your words! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you :)

[CreativeStroke]

You always do such a beautiful job Kelsey. Another piece written wonderfully!

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you

[KeeD]

I find love, peace and God through your poems.. that's truly something for me being a non believe in two out of those three for whatever reasons i've experienced. Thank you for giving me hope and making me believe once more, keep writing you have a gift.

[Lover Of Words]

Wow thank you Keegan for the glowing review and it means the world to me i apprecaite it very much

[Tarry Franck]

This is such a loving piece!

[Lover Of Words]

All for you!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Why thank my loving Niece :)

[Lover Of Words]

I will always love you

[The Nude Writer]

Simply lovely.. I really am in awe of your ability to paint a picture with your words :) Your writing is so soft and soothing..

[Lover Of Words]

Awe thank you I appreciate the compliment

[beautiful dreamer]

beautiful poem for miss you know who

[Lover Of Words]

Yes i know thanks girl

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. I enjoyed the description. Love give us reason to be alive and know real joy. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks Coyote