Melody

Melody 

Your heart beats like a sweet melody

My heart beats with flutters of joy 

Your eyes twinkle light 

Love is like music 

Singing to the heart 

As we live for joy 

Love is the key 

To find our hidden light 

Love is like birds singing in the sun 

Melody of truth

We must follow the sound 

Of the love in our eyes

Reviews

[TPK Stories]

We all must follow the melody of love in our hearts...simply beautiful...

[Cryingkate]

We must follow the sound
Of the love in our eyes

There is more science about sound being found in our visual anatomy then one would think.
For visual light waves are sounds of vibration. I wonder if you really knew what you were saying or if it that Soul Self talking like I was mentioning tonight?
Anyway. Another one of your beautiful poems.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much :)

[David]

This was very nice, I really enjoyed reading it :)

[Calissa Knox]

So beautiful! I like the way you portrayed love. There is a simplicity to this poem, and it created a picture of love being simple. The words flow together like music, and I like the format you used for the words.

Your poem has a perfect, and moving ending,
"We must follow the sound
Of the love in our eyes".

This is wonderful poetry.
Very uplifting. I am inspired!

[Lover Of Words]

Wow thanks for the great review i appreciate it glad i could inspire you!

[Calissa Knox]

No. Thank you, Kelsey!

[Lover Of Words]

Well your welcome

[Alexis]

Such a wonderful way you expressed such a questionable word. I love your work so much(:

[Lover Of Words]

It humbles me to know you like my work dear thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

"We must follow the sound
Of the love in our eyes"
A beautiful poem for love. I like the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tea]

So true. in so many ways. I like this piece of work. Nice job.

[Anand Sehgal]

Love is like birds singing in the sun
Melody of truth
We must follow the sound

true words indeed !