Lady Maiden

Lady Maiden 

You are like a gift 

That i thought i would never receive 

You came into my life unexpectedly 

But a bond that quickly came to be

You have been a grateful treasure 

A grateful woman 

My great Lady Maiden 

Your ability to love is easily seen by me 

Gladly will i say what an inspiration 

You have fastly become 

Greatly how i am to have met the woman like you 

A life changing gift 

My lady Maiden 

You will forever be a light in the distance 

Right into my heart 

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

some people just walk into our lives, and change it forever !
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[The Nude Writer]

This is lovely :) You are such a talented writer :)

[Lover Of Words]

Well so are you dear! :)

[TPK Stories]

What a great tribute...thanks for sharing...

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Had the feel of a short story. I like the use of Lady Maiden. Words used in myth and old story to create beauty and innocents. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cryingkate]

We are all fractals one one light and we are brought together to see our reflections thru each other. Another words we are mirrors. What one deeply sees in one another can only be seen if that is what we are.
So again another words what you see in this Lady Maiden and all the quality's you like is because this is who you are.
You are this Beautiful Lady Maiden. Ps I like your "Lady Maiden" I never heard of a Lady Maiden. Since you created her name, I think you should take on her name.
I think it fits you so well. What do you think?
Ps Did I send you a hug today? And guess what just happened? An old friend of mine has moved back home and we are going to get together and see how our music clicks together. We have a hunch it is a perfect fit.

[Lover Of Words]

Connie can you not see who this is written for?
Congratulations on your friend returning home i am quite happy for you

[Cryingkate]

Ok who ? and thanks for being happy for me that my friend is home.

[Cryingkate]

That's why I was late showing up here tonight.

[Lover Of Words]

It was written for you!!!!!

[Cryingkate]

Yes I thought so, but then I thought maybe I was wrong. But don't you see that it is You that is that Beautiful Lady Maiden? This is what we see in you ! You are the same Inspiration for others that you see in others.

[Lover Of Words]

Well happy you think that

[Cryingkate]

I'll be happier when You know it :-)

[Lover Of Words]

i will one day

[Cryingkate]

How about two days? Then maybe a week and then a month and then years and then a lifetime?

[Lover Of Words]

we shall see

[Cryingkate]

Ha ha ha ha ha ha

[Lover Of Words]

oh laugh it up

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

It is fun how you wrote this vaguely like how a poet might inthe Age ofChivalry

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you for your review

[Sami Khalil]

You have been gifted with love and talents...Bravo..................

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you sir

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome , ma'm...:).......................