Breaking the Chain

Breaking the Chain

A Poem by Kelz

Breaking The Chain

Lost in emotions, no place to turn

Hoping my strength, these cravings will burn

Distracting myself with electrical haze

Must at least try, must get through this phase

Shivering, shaking, the sweats are now here

Spiders and faces arrive, bringing fear

Clutching my stomach, trying to refrain

Just starting to lose the link from the chain

Must not surrender to the sins of my want

Won't let my thirst start to weigh down and haunt

Screaming at four walls, bearing my soul

Nothing can stop me from reaching my goal

Weeks full of torture, and still I stand strong

beginning to rewrite my own future song

Slowly extracting the blade of the knife

Fear darkness will always be part of my life

© 2011 Kelz

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Stirring and powerful.. your words captivate, and bind with the chain you are so eager to break..

Posted 11 Years Ago

you do a great job of portraying the authors feelings onto the reader. I enjoyed your poem and the way it flows is excellent.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Oh my, i understand this, what it means .. to be trapped in a need is like being half dead ..

You write with so much honesty and power - takes great courage.

' Weeks full of torture, and still I stand strong ~ beginning to rewrite my own future song ' ... truly pray you sing out loud, clear and beautifully.

Posted 12 Years Ago

powerful writing , the heart in turmoil , its gathering of strength , to slowly rise and move on ..

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on February 18, 2011
Last Updated on February 18, 2011



Scotland, United Kingdom

Hi, I'm a Scott's lass and love to express myself through the power of word. I see the world through an open mind and am not afraid to share the darkness I have encountered. I search for the truth and.. more..

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