Broken Hearts in Crowded Rooms

Broken Hearts in Crowded Rooms

A Poem by Miss Kerri
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Homecoming 2012.

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The rain cried for you, too,
Through a crowded room,
I finally found you.
Time, it slowed down with you.

Through a crowded room,
Promises were shattered.
Time, it slowed down with you.
You had plans of yours in mind.

Promises were shattered.
Unknown plans fell through,
You had plans of yours in mind.
Broken in a crowded room.

Unknown plans fell through,
Raining, tapping on windows, 
Broken in a crowded room.
Pacing back and forth.

Raining, tapping on windows, 
I finally found you.
Pacing back and forth,
The rain cried for you, too.

© 2013 Miss Kerri


Author's Note

Miss Kerri
This is a pantoum poem of my other poem "The Reality (Part 2)".

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This was also full of emotion, very deep and straight from your heart.
This always makes for the best of poems.
Great poem, keep writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


The theme and presentation are wonderful.
I enjoyed the piece immensely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Miss Kerri

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
zainul

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome,dear poet.:)

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Miss Kerri
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Hi, I'm Kerri and I'm nineteen. My writing style is equivalent to all the doodles on the left side margin of my faded fuschia Philosophy notebook from Staples. All of the pieces that I publish are .. more..

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