Nowadays

From your hungry eyes

Dripping

Drip...drip...drip..drip..

.

.

Gutty of my life

Smell

The days who I have not you

And

Hungry eyes

Steal

Your lost smell

In my eyes..

.

.

Nowadays

I stealing

Every lost love

From each of thief eyes

Just for you...

My melody girl...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Nowadays

I 'm stealing


Every lost love

From each of thief eyes

Just for you...

My melody girl...

[emily rose]

i really like it

[Sami Khalil]

stealing


"Every lost love

From each of thief eyes

Just for you...

My melody girl...'
This write is so beautiful ... Pen on dear poet...:)

[keyvan]

Thank you my friend...Thank you....

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome dear friend...:)

[Jack...]

This kind of reads like a song, very melodic.

[keyvan]

Thank you..

[JR Darewood]

I love the way you use the idea of hunger and thievery in your love poem and the periods dripping down two lines... really clever.

[keyvan]

Thank you.....

[Scarlet Alice]

now I'm pretty you do have a unique writing style :) you seem to like using onomatopeia :)

[keyvan]

oh....thank you...

[Scarlet Alice]

sooo welcome :)

[Will]

Mysterious and evokes plenty of emotion. The drip drip is both awesome onomatopoeia and imagery. I liked this one a lot. Great job :)

[keyvan]

thank you...

[Holly Mason]

my melody girl-that creates a lovely mind picture
reads through well
like the title
content is well placed and reads well
thank you for sharing

[keyvan]

thank you...

[Leslie Philibert]

A good poem, really like the drip drip drip, exactly the right image. So a poem that works, well done.

[keyvan]

thank tou.....