Angelic Beauty

she looks like an angel

 

 

 

I have drawn a picture of you in my mind.

On your face, i have put your sweet light smile

Which i need to feel, everything is fine

From your lips, i let them spill down

My lickable drops of juice, tasting wine

On your cheek i have left a sign

To show the sun, from where it should shine

But i was unable to draw it..your eyes..with their vast horizon

And through your hair, i let my fingers sail

Exploring every pearl

Covering your mind

I beg your pardon, excuse my limited mind

I have never seen an angel,

So it is hard for me to describe

Your sweetness, your light

Showing me the way,

Telling me what is right

Do i love you?

Or do i adore you?

Or cant i find words to describe..

My feelings to you..

Which i no more, can hide

 

 

Author's Note

dont we see angels in the people we love?

Reviews

[stars are far]

that was soo cute...
I loved that :))

[gabrielle]

simply breathtaking...

[Kajal Gulabani]

This is awesome.. Such a phenomenon. Magical and angelic in real sense. Cheers

[Angel of Heart's]

This is a wonderful visual my friend...such beautiful imagery... shines in the moonlight, every brushstroke renders me mesmerised....Exquisitely written.....I love it...:)

[khalid]

thank you for stopping by, reading and reviewing..

[Frieda P]

I simply adore this my friend! It's just pure loveliness and oozes of sensuality and love. You hit it out of the ballpark with this one....it still tickles. Excellent, you're such a romantic.

[Renée]

each line trickles gently down so sweetly
جميل < beautiful ( hope it is right) ( :

[khalid]

yes it is right..beautiful is جميل و جميلة

[Ren&eacute;e]

I see yours has two sections..then i am only part right?

[khalid]

he is beautiful..هو جميل she is beautiful..هي جميلة

[Ren&eacute;e]

هو جميل did i pronounce it right ? giggling

[khalid]

hwa jameel..

[Mockingbird]

i never heard such beautiful words like this. it takes a poet to see such deep beauty.

[khalid]

thank you Mock..i hope you are doing well.

[MOON]

Lovely Khalid and true those we love are often angels .

[khalid]

thank you Moon, you are always motivating

[patricia]

yes it is true...some people have an aura of goodness about them. You write well. It is nice to look for the good in others and a reflection of a mature mind.