I Miss Me

captured by her

 

 

 

I miss me

Since my eyes have fallen on you

And you have..captured me

My soul, has left me and around you, it has flown

My heart is beating calling your name

My mind sees only the image of you which it has drawn.

When you are away, i feel i am lost

Come back to my hug

I want to be..a small bug

So to you, i get always stuck

This is my only way,

To get myself back, to me

 

Reviews

[luviva]

Nice one and well titled. The moment i saw the title i was drawn to it and well, not disappointed though i was thinking of a different angle. Who never looses oneself when they love ehh?

[Aehr]

I loved the title, because it's totally apt for the poem. And the poem itself is wonderful. Good job.

[MOON]

Love this loosing yourself to love so to speak . Lovely write as usual Khalid!

[stars are far]

that is so nice ...and well when you fall in love with love wrong person in my opininon is when you miss your self..but the right person will make you love and be so friendly with your self because you feel that this "self" is wanted by someone and he really loves you ..
so yeah that was a great piece well done :)

[khalid]

thank you so much

[Chris]

I'm afraid that "you" is forever gone because to reach that level of emotion you become forever 'changed'. A very real thought was expressed - shared by the world.

[khalid]

thank you so much for the sweet words

[de_maruf]

Aspects of institutions

Although individual, formal organizations, commonly identified as "institutions," may be deliberately and intentionally created by people, the development and functioning of institutions in society in general may be regarded as an instance of emergence; that is, institutions arise, develop and function in a pattern of social self-organization, which goes beyond the conscious intentions of the individual humans involved.
As mechanisms of social interaction, institutions are manifest in both formal organizations, such as the U.S. Congress, or the Roman Catholic Church, and, also, in informal social order and organization, reflecting human psychology, culture, habits and customs, and encompassing subjective experience of meaningful enactments. Most important institutions, considered abstractly, have both objective and subjective aspects: examples include money and marriage. The institution of money encompasses many formal organizations, including banks and government treasury departments and stock exchanges, which may be termed, "institutions," as well as subjective experiences, which guide people in their pursuit of personal well-being. Powerful institutions are able to imbue a paper currency with certain value, and to induce millions into cooperative production and trade in pursuit of economic ends abstractly denominated in that currency's units.[citation needed] The subjective experience of money is so pervasive and persuasive that economists talk of the "money illusion" and try to disabuse their students of it, in preparation for learning economic analysis.[citation needed]

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Isn't this the same thing you commented on some one else's poem. What are you trying to do? When you review someone, be honest. Making up a review and then copying it on every poem?

[Emily Feret]

I like that idea of not being complete unless you are with that person! :)

[Mockingbird]

i like the way it conveys that the person is not complete without his true love.

[Quill~]

Sweet poem! I love the confession of feeling lost, lovely words. :)