goodbye, father

maybe we dont recognize what father is when he is with us, but if we lose him, we feel guilty that we couldnt recognize what he is!

 

In my life, I had some bad days, but today, it is my worst

It is hard to lose someone dear, I have lost my dearest

The one who used to care, regardless to what  in my wallet

He used to share my sadness not only at a joy moment

All night he used to stay awake, if I am  to have a test

 on his kind voice, up I wake, come, take your breakfast

Oh dad, all night awake! Why didn’t you take some rest?

 go to your test, do your best, this is all my needed rest

and when tests are over I get the marks, rated the first,

I still feel when he pulls me proudly to his chest

The past part of my life, I used to him, what about the rest?

Now I feel like a weak animal alone in a wild forest

Hope you can come back, just to kiss your wrest 

Look at you and say,dearest, hope now, you can rest

Author's Note

yesterday, november 18, 2011 i lost my father, to all, love respect your father before one day you regret not doing that

Reviews

[MOON]

Poignant beautiful write I lost my Dad too last August . I miss his physical presence all the time. Love I still feel when he pulls me proudly to his chest

[Renée]

What a lovely remembrance ..and he would proud...I feel your sorrow..my own father died when I was 6 ...I love phase "I still feel when he pulls me proudly to his chest" what a gift to remember just in those words that moment you shared, says volumes about the love & respect between you ( :

[Nancy]

I hadn't realized your loss is as recent as mine, which was October 21, 2011. Go and read my "Prayers" chapter, this is part of the same book I wrote after my husband died.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Now I feel like a weak animal alone in a wild forest
I loved this expression much..I have really can learn much from your poems!...

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. A good father teaches us how to live and be kind. You described a good man. I'm sorry for your lost. Thank you for sharing the beautiful poem for a good father.
Coyote

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

I am sorry for your loss...... It's a loss beyond measure...
A wonderful tribute!
Peace be upon him!

[Dove]

I'm so sorry you lost your father. And this poem touched my heart.

[stars are far]

Oh....this was so hurtful
i hope for you a long life ...