I L-O-V-E Y-O-U

love

 

                            Innocent babies, kids, teenagers, even if they can't speak or hear  

                            Land, water and air, can tell you how much on you,  I  care 

                        Orchards, plants, grass, flowers and trees, watered by my tears     

                        Violent feelings of missing you and needing you to be here

                      Enough to make volcanoes erupt if felt how much to you I adore

     

                     You shouldn’t think you can find care for you any other where

                     Only because I got all the world care so there is nothing  more            

                      Under the sun for any other one if he felt he wants to share

 

Author's Note

thank you

Reviews

[Renée]

Strong devotion to Your Loved one...Nicely Done !

[Nancy]

Nicely written!

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Interesting acrostic poem! You managed to weave it beautifully. Well done.

[Corey Coreys]

If 3 stanza's you captured years worth of emotions. Amazing job!

[stars are far]

This held many strong emotions .. amazing work :D
Keep that comin :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong emotion and story in the amazing poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[SuicidePact.]

I wish i could of thought of this

[Mockingbird]

the imagery and the sentiment really comes through. i especially like the acrostic form that you used. the two bold lines sound like they can go together. great job.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

it`s great, full of emotions, love and beautifully written!
thank you too...