light

hm

 

If you really want to know

Why im crazy in my love to you

First you have to go

To the moon and ask him why

He tries to be, as bright as you

 

If you want me not to

Be such jealous of you

Go to the sun and ask her

why she is following you!

And ask the stars

To stop winking at you

 

No need for the sun

No need for the moon

No need for stars

, no need for lamps,

 no need for candles

No need for light

Since my light

Is you

Author's Note

hope you like it

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is a beautiful poem. Felt like a Neruda's poem taking the reader to the limit of love and romance. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Its so beautiful! so simple and powerful and real feeling in same time! thank you, Khalid...
~nia~

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed I do, a great piece.

[luna11]

I love this!
It's really sweet. :D

[Thea]

Wow...This is amazing...So creative...Love the symbols used...
:)))

[SuicidePact.]

haha so cute

[?]

This is such a sweet..loving poem

[Mockingbird]

another lovely poem, khalid. it is intense when you compare her to the sun, the moon and the stars; how she is brighter than them. she is a lucky girl to have someone who loves her so deeply. excellent job

[Sleeping Maiden]

hmmm it's interesting. Nice imagery and symbolism..
I like it. =)