our love, mixed arabic english song

i like songe mixing different languages

Baby do you really feel

 how much I am

 so much in you?

How much  I do

 really love you?

How much im always

missing you?

How much I need to

 be with you?

Baby baby please just hug me,

deep in your heart,

 I hope you keep me,

 I just want to

 live inside you

please  please keep me,

in your heart always,

save me,

out of there I never

wanna be

 even to heaven

 I don’t want to go

And from my side,

 I promise you,

 I will be calm

 not disturbing you,

all I want to,

 is just to be

 with you,

 wherever you go

Wana wallahi Kaman kteer bahibik,wtool omri wana moshta'alik wbahtag eleeek
Ta'ali habibti adomik wgwa albi and ahotik wbdami ana arweeeeek
Wmin a'alik ini hakhaliki, tsibini walaw lahza ?! dana masada'at inni regeat leek
Wmin a'alik bitizagini? izagik lia yheeni, wbkol makan telmaho eini ashoof eneek

Together
I love you, bahibik,
 I miss you, moshta'alik,
 I need you , mehtaglik,
 hug me, adomik,
 kiss me abosik
 feel me ahisik,
lets live, yalla naesh, our love, hobina, forget life, ninsa edonia, wneesh lbaadina

Author's Note

just felt needing to make a mix between english and arabic in a song..crazy i know!

Reviews

[jennifer little]

wonderful poem great job keep up the good work thanks for sharing with me

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Amazing, beautiful and really original, Khalid! you make it in great way..even I don`t understand Arabic, but here I could say I catch some words :)

[Thea]

Aw...That was heartfelt and well expressed...It wasn't crazy! Haha! It was actually nice and creative! Well done!
:)))

[Mockingbird]

i would love to be serenaded in arabic so i could hear how beautiful the language is.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of words and i could hear the song in the words. A positive song of love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[?]

This was cool...NICE job...
There is no HUG like one that comes deep from within ones HEART
Very good

[Renée]

Not crazy...a delightful joyful sight to read, to see words of another culture expressing in written form also... just as in life when two culture sing of love together ..its sweet Khalid !

[patricia]

loved the first stanza especially.
Enjoyed...I will be calm not disturbing you.
The Together stanza was wonderful.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oooo...I really love how this one turned. I like how you used a language in this.. =) Such a fantastic poem! I love the passion in this for that special someone..
The yearn and wanting is so strong.. in this piece. I really love it!

Wonderful job!!