beauty

 

some people are into kids

some may like money

others love power and authority

but for me, i adore beauty

and you are, extremely pretty

so you are for me, priceless

although i dont know why you are

greedy like this

when God distributed beauty,

you have got all of it

left only small bit

all other creatures share in it

and you even haven't left it

you have got your share even in it

when you are in a street,

all eyes you get

making men feet stuck to the asphelt

not caring they may have an accident

 

when i am asked, what beauty is

i point at you and say....(this)

they reply..no beauty is less

than that found in this

but what to do?no words in languages

can describe you my mistress!

 

 

Reviews

[Virtuosa X]

Nicely done. liked the last stanza very much.

[Nancy]

I like this! Your poetry has a wonderful flow to it!

[?]

A lovely poem...very sweet

[Jadey]

I sooo Love this!! :D nice one... I enjoyed reading this my friend.

[Sleeping Maiden]

This is so lovely!! i love it so much! So direct ~ i love the theme!

[Romero Calderon]

very straightforward. no hyperbole.
you write:
" but what to do?no words in languages
can describe you my mistress!"

and you did well in not attempting to...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Expressive wording and talented plotting, well done, good read.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the second stanza that ended this sweet poem, nice words.

[Ellie Howard]

i love reading all of your writing, great job on this one!

[Miss CB]

Such lovely words used to make an amazing poem...
Well done!