the visit

visiting a brief moment to feel alive

it is so awful to go back again and again

to hear the chords of my soul vibrate against this emotion

I hold the bow and stretch my arm, as my longing for this to last longer than before

the simplest of stares, gestures, pauses...

I want to visit you again and again

to be in that dream, even if only for the seconds it took to burn that memory into my mind

stringing that most delicate sound of life 

I do not know what is time when all of mine is just a visit

back I go and forward my body 

please just keep me in this chamber, this symphony 

Reviews

[Bacchus]

Not sure if the members
Of this orchestra are really friends or foe-interesting place to leave the reader

[Dolce Vita]

I like this very much; especially your control when writing about such strong emotion. Beautiful words.

[Papaya]

Saying good bye and parting ways is so hard when we want those moments to last. Even if we're only parting until seeing each other the next day. It feels like new love. When you always want that other person's attention and time.