"Isn't Love Suppose To Be Fear-less?"

"Isn't Love Suppose To Be Fear-less?"

A Poem by khweli
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I just recently learnt that one of the reasons for the so many failed relationships is because of the fear that has imprisoned so many people and with this i hope im birthing a seed of change or of breakthrough for those in need of it.

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I wish i could reach deep within your eyes

And wipe away your fears

Of loving me today

So we can be happy tomorrrow.

© 2008 khweli


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So beautiful. You said so much in so few words. Told a whole story in a few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simplicity is powerful and so is this poem. These are really hard pieces to write and this one came across beautifully!! Great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many have sadly learned to fear love
I still think there are good honest single people out there
We just have to put aside the fear
Nice write
Ray

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Those are some simple words expressing a lovely thought. Many do fear love, but I've never understood it. I hope your seed grows, Khweli.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. It is simply put and to the point. If we could erase that initial fear of the unkown, of what if, we could get past reservations and then maybe enjoy love. Well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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khweli

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