never give up

never give up

A Poem by I am renee

Fly so high and reach cloud 9
Be a bird in disguise when no one else is around you
"never give up"
As times are hard and you can't breathe for much longer
"take a deep breathe"
Stress doesn't just leave you instantly like people say
... Do you believe in you?
As the statement of self goes "..life is too short"
Is it really short? Or too long for you to take in?
"never give up"
People judge you and hate on you
#dontletitgettoyou
... But when it's too late what do you do?
Life is hard just like the sky is blue
"WHO THE F**K ARE YOU?"
When it's hard to express yourself where do you go?
Who can you reach out a hand to?
Who are you?
"never give up"
As your last days get closer live it up
Drink, smoke, dance, laugh, smile
What makes you happy?
What's keeping you up at night ?
... Darling close your eyes and breathe for a second
Never give up on you
When things are down and out
Your heart races and you feel butterflies in your stomach
"one step at a time"
Tie your shoes, splash water in your face..
If you can't take it much longer YELL AND SCREAM UNTIL SOMEBODY HEARS YOU LOUD AND CLEAR
"never give up"
On you... Friends... Family
It's time to breathe again when your lungs start closing in
"things happen for a reason but did you do it for a reason or for a lesson"
Some don't see what love is really about~ who was there for them when nobody else was~ as time goes on take it day by day
"NEVER GIVE UP" 🙌

© 2015 I am renee


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A very nice piece renee! I really like the tone here, like the speaker is daring the reader to do things and act a certain way. It's a very nice message that I think we all need to hear sometimes. Thank you for sharing! I really enjoyed this!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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I am renee
I am renee

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i love writing for the enjoyment. im black and white, and i only write about things that come to mind. ive already written a book call the rhythm of poetry. more..

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