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Quiet

Quiet

A Poem by KieraCrimeScene
"

Sun rise.

"

Its quite

an evening

In the dark 

 

Its a quiet evening

except a song of a lark.

 

Hours have past

The night carrys on.

They are coming now.

To take away the moon.

The darkness holds on tight.

It hugs the earth

with a sudden fright.

 

Slowly 

Slowly

Slowly

Here it comes.

The horizon is visible

The dark is drowning.

In the light.

Tis not time

to say good night.

 

© 2008 KieraCrimeScene


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This is impressive for a twelve year old. Although simple, knowing your age makes it very amazing, considering the mystical tone and words you decided to use. It'll be very interesting to see your abilities grow as a writer.

Nice work.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, Kiera!!! What a great poem! You are certainly talented beyond your twelve years. I'm very impressed. Nice work, kiddo!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


It is a lovley little poem! I enjoyed this!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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KieraCrimeScene
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wow, I'm 14 now.. and uh, looking back, I friggin' sucked. I don't right poetry anymore, as you can tell because I'm terrible at it. I do essays. I love to write, but uh I can't believe I got good .. more..

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