i need you to be happy retold

If this song can make me smile

Sing it to me

no more faces

A moment is enough

You were just a try

Or just a chance

That should I take or not

If wearing this ring can make me happy

i want it on my finger

they think it's just a grass tied into a ring

But to me it's beautiful

As long as I'm happy

If this dance can make me smile

Dance with me

I want you free from worries

Forever might be too much

An hour is perfect for me

But to love you

I might forget the steps

If loving you can make me happy

i love you

no blessings from everyone

its okay

because

all i need is you..

As long as I'm happy

With you..

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

It's better, still really like it.........but I didn't mean to remove the punctuation all together lol.