The Hallowed Weeping

the walls find her collapsing from weeping held by unwanted arms silenced her speaking silently wispering a lonely prayer release her heart of dying withered hollow alone clinching the hands of the empty silenly wispering a lonely prayer of silenced tears consuming her secret her prayer for the hollowed weeping softly breathing holding a heart weeping forever inlonging to lie in the arms of her beloved he has perished her heart stopped breathing along with his an unspoken prayer withered hollow alone hollowed weeping.........

Author's Note

sorry about this
it was my first poem ever

Reviews

[PhantomDancer]

I am surprised, but I do like it. It is unusual at first, but you have used an unusual style to create something quite special. Well done.

[kim schmidt]

but i personally love it