velvet

soft erotica / a first kiss

 

Vibrant tension between us

Sparkling eyes colliding

People around disappear

When you are near

Senses befogged by your aura

Your closeness is all I want

All I can think about

Your warmth, your arms around me

Is all I need

Suddenly your lips so close

Your heat I can feel on mine

Moment purely divine

Your beauty engulfs

In my closing eyes

Softly your lips touch mine

World vanishes into nothingness

Sparks, and heartbeat

I sense the warmth of your lips

Slowly retreat, my eyes won't open

My knees of jello

Heat burns like fire

With a new touch of your lips

Heart beats to jump out my chest

Wonderful sensation when your lips

Touch harder, asking for more

Willingly I welcome your breath into mine

Heat mingling

Tingling through my veins

Ecstasy of pure bliss

Shyly your tongue in search

Timidly caressing

Time and space melt into heaven

My fingers roam your neck

To your silky curls

Combing through their softness

While your tongue

Tenderly caresses mine

And delicately pleases me

Your velvet plays around mine

Shows me carefully

Your hot intimacy

As I lay all the love

I feel for you into this

Wordless declaration ...

 

 

Author's Note

a first kiss ...

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

very descriptive without being too graphical presented in poetic prose, However the constantly repeated mine detracts from your writing

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

Beautiful! As I read this, I felt like I was kissing someone. This brings up a lot of emotion and images for me that are simply divine! Great job with this!