Love-What is love?

Love-What is love?

A Story by Kim
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After hiding from me for so long, love unveiled its face. He is six feet tall and I was winded by his beauty. How do I know this is love? Perhaps it is the gentle rhythmic beating of my heart, the uncontrollable butterflies fluttering in the pit of my stomach, or even the spark that ignited the first time our eyes met. These new and unfamiliar feelings mingled, and spoke of how he differed from any man who broke my heart in the past.

 These feelings are reinforced with a smile; capturing my attention and intensifying the rate of my pulse. The sound of his  voice engulfs all others, a voice that comes from somewhere deep in his chest, the potential to be violent thunder, yet it remains softly spoken like, a mid afternoon rain;  turning other conversations into trivial whispers. Nothing can compare to the experience that follows his arrival.

I feel as though we are the only two in a world full of strangers where  time is but a faint shadow of more meaningful apparitions. As these sensations begin to take over, gradually infusing me with long lasting daydreams that entrap my mind, leaving me in their wake with smiles and soft memories of his name being sung as if by a harp strong and true.

In the deepest recesses of my dreams, I never imagined,  this kind of man entering my life; a man who would bring security and reassurance. No one in this entire world could consider hurting me again because he is standing beside me like a protective guard. He is my knight in shining armor, the prince of Cinderella, the Romeo of every Juliet. Even a simple memory or thought of him seems to shelter me from harm, and bring surprises into my  life which could soon turn into reality.


This powerful, awe-inspiring sensation has finally found me. It’s left me breathless and starry  eyed, even though I never thought it could. My heart is a locket, and he holds the key. He is everything I could ever want. He took me completely by surprise; I found my reflection in his eyes. At first, he was not what I expected him to be, but with time, I realized that he was everything and more. We have grown so close through the magical moments we’ve shared. The first kiss, that was the first moment I knew he was the one for me. Our time together has only made me fall deeper in love, and it’s a feeling I never want to lose. Joy, understanding, and care have filled our lives. I have never experienced this with another person before.  This man’s intoxicating personality has earned my respect and admiration, and no one  has ever shown me their soul in the way he has. How many people can truthfully say they have found their soul mate? I have and I can.

 I admire the way he holds me close as I fall asleep on the couch while we are watching a movie. When all I want to do is cry, he comforts me, lending a shoulder for my tears. This feeling he gives me is a warm glow tingling across my skin.  Perfection is not possible in life nor in relationships, but those flaws make our time together that much more significant. The ups and downs make the ride worthwhile, and our disagreements make the bonds stronger. We have each other, and no moment between us is wasted.

Our affection is elegant, his arms around me are my one sanctuary, sheltering me from everyday pain. Each moment we share is enchanting; it transcends time and space. His laughter reminds me of the reasons why I fell in love with him in the first place. Compared to his, all other smiles seem ordinary. Every emotion, every action is the definition of amazement. He is the reason for my rejoicing and the permanent presence of fulfillment in my heart.

I love him more with each passing day and I know that my deep feelings for him will only grow stronger as time progresses. Without him I am lost in a world of turmoil. He is my reason for living, I trust him with all that I am, and all I hope to be. He completes me in a way that fills my heart overflowing with love. I feel so blessed to have found this wonderful man, and to make him my one and only. He is the sunlight that drives away the shadows; he turns my bad days into pure bliss, and makes me whole. I will love him eternally.

 There is nothing I do not like about him. He has the most adorable, and enticing green eyes, and his brown curly locks tempt  the playful side in me. When he speaks, joy comes alive in me.  His touch makes me weak, and whenever I look into his eyes, I cannot turn away from his compelling gaze. I see the world as it could be, and how it should be through him. When he speaks, words are more then sounds and his voice is a lullaby from his heart to mine. His presence is my Eden.

There may be other men out there like the one I love. The same kindness he brings to me can be brought to other women, voyaging and searching for a man to mend their hearts from a broken experience. The one thing that holds us all together is hope. Hope will bring faith, and faith will bring destiny. Keep your hopes high to store that faith deep within. Love is sneaky, creeping in when you least expect it and wraps around your heart. You will find someone that will treat you well, and that will make your life whole. He will cherish and value you more than he will value his own life. He will risk anything and everything to be with you and you will do the same. Keep that hope, and nothing will fail to satisfy your dreams when you find, your one, true love.After hiding from me for so long, love unveiled its face. He is six feet tall and I was winded by his beauty. How do I know this is love? Perhaps it is the gentle rhythmic beating of my heart, the uncontrollable butterflies fluttering in the pit of my stomach, or even the spark that ignited the first time our eyes met. These new and unfamiliar feelings mingled, and spoke of how he differed from any man who broke my heart in the past.

 These feelings are reinforced with a smile; capturing my attention and intensifying the rate of my pulse. The sound of his  voice engulfs all others, a voice that comes from somewhere deep in his chest, the potential to be violent thunder, yet it remains softly spoken like, a mid afternoon rain;  turning other conversations into trivial whispers. Nothing can compare to the experience that follows his arrival.

I feel as though we are the only two in a world full of strangers where  time is but a faint shadow of more meaningful apparitions. As these sensations begin to take over, gradually infusing me with long lasting daydreams that entrap my mind, leaving me in their wake with smiles and soft memories of his name being sung as if by a harp strong and true.

In the deepest recesses of my dreams, I never imagined,  this kind of man entering my life; a man who would bring security and reassurance. No one in this entire world could consider hurting me again because he is standing beside me like a protective guard. He is my knight in shining armor, the prince of Cinderella, the Romeo of every Juliet. Even a simple memory or thought of him seems to shelter me from harm, and bring surprises into my  life which could soon turn into reality.


This powerful, awe-inspiring sensation has finally found me. It’s left me breathless and starry  eyed, even though I never thought it could. My heart is a locket, and he holds the key. He is everything I could ever want. He took me completely by surprise; I found my reflection in his eyes. At first, he was not what I expected him to be, but with time, I realized that he was everything and more. We have grown so close through the magical moments we’ve shared. The first kiss, that was the first moment I knew he was the one for me. Our time together has only made me fall deeper in love, and it’s a feeling I never want to lose. Joy, understanding, and care have filled our lives. I have never experienced this with another person before.  This man’s intoxicating personality has earned my respect and admiration, and no one  has ever shown me their soul in the way he has. How many people can truthfully say they have found their soul mate? I have and I can.

 I admire the way he holds me close as I fall asleep on the couch while we are watching a movie. When all I want to do is cry, he comforts me, lending a shoulder for my tears. This feeling he gives me is a warm glow tingling across my skin.  Perfection is not possible in life nor in relationships, but those flaws make our time together that much more significant. The ups and downs make the ride worthwhile, and our disagreements make the bonds stronger. We have each other, and no moment between us is wasted.

Our affection is elegant, his arms around me are my one sanctuary, sheltering me from everyday pain. Each moment we share is enchanting; it transcends time and space. His laughter reminds me of the reasons why I fell in love with him in the first place. Compared to his, all other smiles seem ordinary. Every emotion, every action is the definition of amazement. He is the reason for my rejoicing and the permanent presence of fulfillment in my heart.

I love him more with each passing day and I know that my deep feelings for him will only grow stronger as time progresses. Without him I am lost in a world of turmoil. He is my reason for living, I trust him with all that I am, and all I hope to be. He completes me in a way that fills my heart overflowing with love. I feel so blessed to have found this wonderful man, and to make him my one and only. He is the sunlight that drives away the shadows; he turns my bad days into pure bliss, and makes me whole. I will love him eternally.

 There is nothing I do not like about him. He has the most adorable, and enticing green eyes, and his brown curly locks tempt  the playful side in me. When he speaks, joy comes alive in me.  His touch makes me weak, and whenever I look into his eyes, I cannot turn away from his compelling gaze. I see the world as it could be, and how it should be through him. When he speaks, words are more then sounds and his voice is a lullaby from his heart to mine. His presence is my Eden.

There may be other men out there like the one I love. The same kindness he brings to me can be brought to other women, voyaging and searching for a man to mend their hearts from a broken experience. The one thing that holds us all together is hope. Hope will bring faith, and faith will bring destiny. Keep your hopes high to store that faith deep within. Love is sneaky, creeping in when you least expect it and wraps around your heart. You will find someone that will treat you well, and that will make your life whole. He will cherish and value you more than he will value his own life. He will risk anything and everything to be with you and you will do the same. Keep that hope, and nothing will fail to satisfy your dreams when you find, your one, true love.

© 2009 Kim


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to repeat what my message said:::

oh my god!! your essay is amazing..its truly one of the most beautiful things i've ever read i nearly started crying you captured the essence of love and wrote it down in a magical way ...wow It's absolutely amazing. I looked hard for anything to critique you on, but I found nothing. This essay is pure and beautiful and would make even the coldest, most bitter person smile and long for a love this true. This is obviously written true to your love, because I don't think anyone who hasn't experienced finding their soulmate would be able to write so passionately and profoundly. I hope to one day find the love you described in this essay.

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I already sent you a message.. but I'll reiterate my words:
It is lovely how it is. =]

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Oh.. My sweet.. Not one word need to leave... No!
In such a second you have enchanted me with this poetry
Your soul reveals that you feel love
A love that is magical.. and powerful...Such as your spirit..why change it?
In fact.. this one will go on ..favorite.. oh yes!
I love the flow and the wording along with your soul.. Love it , Looooooooooooooove it

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Ebs
What a beautiful and sweet essay.
Love is such wonderful topic to write about. It's so deep, which you've shown through this essay.
Well done. Keep it up!

Ebs

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This is an excellent essay.
Not only is the topic beautiful but you have written it wonderfully.
Probably one of the best essays I've read.
Great job!
-Elissa

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How special is this! I agree that it moved me so much I cannot really focus on what to suggest. Thank you for this.

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I think Marissa said it all.

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to repeat what my message said:::

oh my god!! your essay is amazing..its truly one of the most beautiful things i've ever read i nearly started crying you captured the essence of love and wrote it down in a magical way ...wow It's absolutely amazing. I looked hard for anything to critique you on, but I found nothing. This essay is pure and beautiful and would make even the coldest, most bitter person smile and long for a love this true. This is obviously written true to your love, because I don't think anyone who hasn't experienced finding their soulmate would be able to write so passionately and profoundly. I hope to one day find the love you described in this essay.

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Lets see what can i say about myself. My name is Kimberly Hinkle:) Born on Jan 2nd 1991 My home is in Kentucky* i don't live in the past. i live in the present & look forward to the future=] Walking T.. more..


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