pain

feelings

what is the wind ?

but a thousand sighs !

what are the seas ?

but cups of tears !

what are the stars ?

but lost memories !

Author's Note

hi all

Reviews

[Sarah W. French]

very good. I like the use of ! and ? It would like to see more like this.

[AK]

Great write! The emotions are expressed very well:)

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Simple, bittersweet feelings.

[Renée]

The simplicity make every word dance..beautiful write !