Depression

i dont feel this way, i just got bored, lol.

Depression

 

Depressed

supressed emotions

aches and pains

just doesn't feel the same.

 

Waking up to a world unwelcome,

falling asleep to a world unknown.

What does it truly mean to live

or die?

 

Little voices in your head

telling you what you should do

why wont they go away

for what they say is getting to you.

 

 

Reviews

[Kat-Marie Berti]

I like this poem, very realistic, readers can relate to! :) Wonderful write!

[K.b.tucker]

you should polish this up and repost.

[Emily Atteberry]

dude tony i really like this. at first i wasn't sure what the rhyme scheme was but you tied it up nicely with the abcb rhyme style.

it has a really serious, sad tone... but that's good for this piece.

put more up!!!

[Kingelocin]

it isnt finished yet. my bad sry.