Tears Of Blood

i mad this whith vicky (i think)

She sitting there crying now,
Streams of tears drown the sound,
She tells herself she’s no use,
Grabs the gun and screams just shot,
She pulls the trigger to end her life, 
A puddle of red falls from her eyes,
Her shocking end came and died,
Did she have no meaning in her life?
If only then someone said,
you are the greatest friend.

Reviews

[Bryce Simonds]

First line, "She sitting there crying now," Do you mean "She's"?
Other than that there isn't much to critique. Good write.
Thanks for sharing.
-Bryce

[D. Lesyrhc]

This poem can relate to a lot of people, like someone needs a friend to be appreciated. Very nice work.

[AmeliaRose]

Deep. i like how you bolder words in color to add emphasis. it flowed well- like a song. although sad, it was very pretty