in my dream

in my dream

A Poem by kirsten773

in my dream,
i am a yellow balling flying,
i was hit so hard i should have been crying,
im almost there! 
this moments so tence!
i am right there!
yes! 
i have made it over the fence!
i hit the ground,
but there is no sound,
no yelling,
no screaming, 
only the runners feet tapping,
bright lights shine from above,
then thunderous clapping,
i know this is my place,
i feel it in my heart that this new found place fits like a glove,
i smile,
there is bright colored flowers at my feet in a pile,
how can i smile in this massive craze?
shakespeare said it best,
all the words a stage,
i know the time is now!
so i do, i did it,
i take my bow!

© 2011 kirsten773


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Fantastic personification!!!!!!! You really get a feel for the ball's POV. Well written and great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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kirsten773
kirsten773

morongo valley, ca., CA



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