lies

this is a poem i wrote in 8th grade. i just found it and i kinda like it.

im trapped in the dark night with no one around,

the air is chilled and the sky is black,

a sense of protection is what i lack,

im walking but there is no end,

this endless road take me to a hopeless mind,

this straight line will not bend,

these fake answers that i build leaves my heart shattered and my brain killed,

lungs fill with no air,

legs with no motion,

but who am i to foretell these lies,

i wish my eyes would close,

and not have them open,

Reviews

[CaitlynYOO(:]

The person who wrote this must be BEAST!

[kirsten773]

bill i dont care about my grammar errors... ahaha.. i intended it to be that way aha

[Valandil93]

ooooh Very dark and angsty. You really get a sense for the horror that is presented in the poem. There are a couple of grammar errors, but they are overshadowed b the creativity in the poem. Great job :)