Perfection.
A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
 A study of religion. 
Pray to heaven,
Forsake a hell,
Making noises,
A man to tell,
A hollow dome,
A marble altar,
Smoking incense,
Amen to falter.
© 2011 Thomas Fitzgerald
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It seems so fraigle and cut to the point in many terms...I enjoyed it...thank you..
actually perfect.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Amen to falter...
I'll remember that line for the rest of my life.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Intresting look on religion. :3 Loved the poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Great way to work out look into a well versed poem. I can feel the short story inside each line. Very nicely compiled. :]
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Its perfection XD Really great
Posted 13 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Flawlessness: without any blemish or imperfection.
A witty write…
Posted 13 Years Ago
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"Amen to falter"? are you implying the walk of faith is an unsteady one?
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amzing!! awesome great work!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Wow this was truly amazing.
Posted 13 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Just a little bit confused ..... is it supposed to be "making nosies" or "making noises"? I think its making noises right?
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Added on April 20, 2011
Last Updated on April 20, 2011
Tags: Religion, God, Priests.
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Thomas FitzgeraldWexford, Leinster, Ireland
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