Dear Santa

no i'm not 6.

Dear Santa

 

I know I’m luckier then most.

But.

There’s one thing that I want the most this year.

And.

I don’t know if you can give it.

Or.

If some other higher power has to.

So.

I wish that I had love.

Not.

From family or friends.

Although.

I wish them happiness and health.

It’s.

Love from someone special.

Meaning.

Anyone special, just someone.

It’s.

Been too long since the last one, the only one.

And.

I need a special someone.

So.

Santa, please.

If.

You can grant me this one wish.

I.

Promise to be a good girl next year.

From,

Me.

Reviews

[A sea person]

Thank you for the submission to my contest the spirit of Christmas! However, as this poem does not follow the guidlines it can't be considered.

Stylistically, I find it very interesting. Is there any particular reason that all of the sentences end in periods? This makes it more difficult to read but if you had a reason - though I can't see it - maybe it works?

Thanks again for the submission!

[Elly]

Interesting style, I like it a lot. Very realistic, very true. I think many of us hope for a special someone on Christmas, though not all of us are lucky enough to get it. I can relate.

Excellent job!