Remembrance

I Forgot To Say Its Not Meant To Be

I Forgot To Say "Its Over"

I Forgot To Say Youre Scaring Me

I Forgot To Say Dont Try And Be A Lover

 

I Forgot The Way That You Missed Me

I Forgot Your Fingertips

I Forgot That You Once Held The Key

I Forgot The Attraction Of Your Lips

 

And Its Just So Hard To Say

That Time Has Moved On

Its So Hard To Say

Myself I Have Withdrawn

Its Hard To Lie To My Mind

So Hard To Keep To The Path

When You Make Me Blind

 

I Remembered That We Moved On

I Remembered At The Cruical Moment

I Remembered The Goodbye We Settled Upon

I Remembered All The Lonely Abandonment

 

I Remembered Every Word You Ever Said

I Remembered As Images Flashed Through My Head

I Remembered Every Single Tear We Both Cried

I Remembered Who I Felt For Inside

 

But Its Just So Hard To Say

You'll Have To Do Without Me

Its So Hard To Say

We Were Never Gonna Be

Its Hard To Let Reason Cloud My Mind

But Harder Still To Want

To Try One More Time

 

Author's Note

About an ex of mine, we had so many problems it could never work again. But when I saw them again briefly, there was a "moment" described in this.

Reviews

[Everything Happens For ..]

Thanks for all the feedback, I appreciate it =] I'm working on something else, again thanks for all the encouragement
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[Dkincaid]

It's a good start, but it's agreed, if you want people to notice you here, give them variety, something to weed through, the good and the bad. I didn't feel the writer until I came here, well, still actually don't feel accomplished in any way, but writing and being read here is comfortable plus if you really start reading other works here, gives you a good idea how to express yourself in more varied ways. You have one good write, don't stop now.

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[Jazmyne]

to tell you the truth i really did like this. there were alot of re use on words. maybe you can try to comine those sentences. i do the same thing re use the words. it is hard to write about the person you thought you loved. but you did a good job expressing your self. cant wait to read more from ya!