Moments

another gay thing about my boyfriend <3

There is a beautiful silence

Between your lips and mine

Chests inflate and heartbeats race

From dull, resting passionate tension

Limbs touch and legs graze

Yours and mine entwined.

 

There is an amazing connection

Between your fingers, and my nerves

With each brush, each stroke, of those dainty tips

My nerves they contract, then fall to jelly quite quick

 

There is a gorgeous understanding

That we speak through our eyes

When I glance to your pupils then slowly down to your lips

You lean somehow, someway

To administer a loving kiss.

Reviews

[Secondhand Tink]

Incredibly romantic, so much love with just a light hint of passion.

Lovely structure.

I like the colours too :]]

Much love

[Adela Muresan]

How sweet and erotic.
Your thoughts flow with great precision in verses.
The only thing I don't like is that you chose to use such a diverse color palette; it makes it somehow childish.

A.M.