metamorphose

this poem is about..how human mind culminates with desire...and faces sorrow throughout life..instead of reacting on situation,we should learn to accept the happening of facts....

i sat on the sea shore

looking up in the sky..

night of new moon..

dispersing its radiance

on the surface of sea,

 tides were falling 

greedily  on rock

and the rock stands still..

both so disparate,

yet attempting to

 to immerse in one other..

one is in determined meditation

and other wants to ruin everything in passion...

 

i say abode

to this body

and this is not my 

eternal stay...

turmoils falls on it..

impatient to swallow...

i in the influence of desire..

culminate with it...

this wrong of mind...

left me bleed...

 

its again a new dawn..

calling it to begin afresh...

the unquenchable thirst to 

live now comes to end....

death is just departing flesh and blood...

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

First stanza places you, with the moon
and the stars, a romantic situation.
2nd. You state that you are the rock, that
your resoluction will withstand the tides of
passion and the persistance of your lover.
Warning: The sands of the seashore were once
rocks. The rocks have been worn down by the
tides untll the rocks are just dirt.
3rd. You begin to believe. The persistent desire
makes you wonder and you give in .
4th. You surrender and in the surrender your
battlefield is left strewn with your blood, your
soul.
5th. Life is more than flesh and blood. Life is the
total of our ideals, morals and aspirations.
Sometimes death is part of living. Hopefully new
life will be breathed into this body of morals and
knowledge and you will be stronger for your experience.
God Bless !
Your poem is a powerful statement and it should be
read and studied by everyone.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Eagle Cruagh]

Kkanchan,
This is very complicated, with many thoughts
and nuances to consider.
I will read it several times, then give you my
best opinion.
I am impressed. Your writing is very sophisticated
Thank you---- I will be back with a review.
----- Eagle Cruagh