Dreaming

I always thought

Love was too hard to get

So, I'd just shut my eyes

And dream of it

I told myself

It could break your heart

And you could never mend

What was taken apart

But just maybe

It's worth it

It can be tough

But also perfect

So, I dreamed

Ever since

I was young

Of my prince

Then I met him

And I fell in love

He was more than anything

I had dreamed of

Author's Note

Your thoughts? :)

Reviews

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Beautiful. I epecially loved the line -
" I always thought
Love was too hard to get
So, I'd just shut my eyes
And dream of it"

[akapr17other]

Aww this is so sweet and innocent. I love it :)

[Yina]

Aw that's so sweet. Dreamlike and almost like a fantasy yet seems so real:) Wondeful

[Tate Morgan]

I told myself
It could break your heart
And you could never mend
What was taken apart

This was the bes part poetry is work and most dont like tha i forces us to work on something to beautify it Davincies Mona lisa took 18 yrs to paint and he never finished it

[Short.Nerd]

I like it:)

[Jazique]

Awe totally reminds me of what I call mine Dreaming but, your had alot more good rhymes. Well done. Totally relate. Its hard to picture love in real life but, in dreams anything is possible. So my thoughts are magnificent, beautiflu, lovely, truthful, brlliant, marvelous and all of above. Excellent job and keep up the amazing work.

[Tasha]

it was beautiful, you did a great job! :)

[Krystal Nicole]

I love it!!! Great job and I cant wait until I meet my prince:)

[~Lizzy♬]

Aw, this is so cute! I love the love through the poem, it's beautiful! :)

~Lizzard~

[☯]

Simplistic and adorable. Part animated, and part real. Great job :)